Minor Characters

I think an important minor character in the play is Finch's dad. Although he played a big role alive, he seems to pop up everynow and then when hes dead. I think hes important becasue he scraped the dead skin off of Finch's face which turned her into who she is in a way. What really caught my eye about him was when he turned into the rain and seeped into Finch's jail cell when she was arrested for the letter she sent to Louis. I also like the fact that he always has something positive to say to Finch when ever she has a problem.

Taking Stock of Your Work

-I think my story flowed very well and had enough despriptive detail to make my story clear to any reader
-I think my transitions & detail about my character were the best things out my narrative
-Added details to the setting
-I just tried to remember back when it happened and jotted down a few things about the actual expierence
-Off my minor memories I developed a rough draft, then edited it and make correctections and turned it into the final
-No
-I got more detail about the characters
-Nothing