Minor Characters

I think an important minor character in the play is Finch's dad. Although he played a big role alive, he seems to pop up everynow and then when hes dead. I think hes important becasue he scraped the dead skin off of Finch's face which turned her into who she is in a way. What really caught my eye about him was when he turned into the rain and seeped into Finch's jail cell when she was arrested for the letter she sent to Louis. I also like the fact that he always has something positive to say to Finch when ever she has a problem.

Taking Stock of Your Work

-I think my story flowed very well and had enough despriptive detail to make my story clear to any reader
-I think my transitions & detail about my character were the best things out my narrative
-Added details to the setting
-I just tried to remember back when it happened and jotted down a few things about the actual expierence
-Off my minor memories I developed a rough draft, then edited it and make correctections and turned it into the final
-No
-I got more detail about the characters
-Nothing

My Dash

My dash has quite the story too it. There are many things i can say but what i would like to concentrate the most on are my family and freinds. First off my mom and dad are the loves of my life, i would not know where i would be without them, my dad, probably the coolest guy ever, has pretty much taught me everything i know and has gotten me to the point that I am at. My mom has always been there for emotion support, always pushing me to do my best, and always look at the bright side. My freinds are my life, without them i would be a couch potato, we always have fun, doing pretty much what ever when ever. So many pointless roadtrips, so many storys, so many laughs...

About dead people

The only book that ive read that the main character talks to the dead is Harry Potter and Sourcers Stone. This happened in the end of the book, and he only talked to them for a breif period of time. I think it was pretty weird being able to see you dead parents in a mirror and being able to talk to them, but its also very unrealistic. It made me think if anyone could actually talk to the dead, not like through meditating, but i think that people have seen ghosts and things like that and i wonder if its possible to actually communicate with them. I highly doubt it, but just reading about talking to the dead just made me think...